Thursday, 29 August 2013

The Storm


This is a story about a storm

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hey Raechal
I love the way you said at the end "when will it stop" that is a good sentence to put at the end of your story.It is very stink that the thunder and lighten woke you up.

Anonymous said...

thanks for the comment maopa now i know what i need to work on

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