I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Ms. Komor.
Hey Raechal I love the way you said at the end "when will it stop" that is a good sentence to put at the end of your story.It is very stink that the thunder and lighten woke you up.
thanks for the comment maopa now i know what i need to work on
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Hey Raechal
I love the way you said at the end "when will it stop" that is a good sentence to put at the end of your story.It is very stink that the thunder and lighten woke you up.
thanks for the comment maopa now i know what i need to work on
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