I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Ms. Komor.
Thursday, 31 October 2013
Writing
Start here: The boy wakes up he recognises that he is on a narrow pathway he starts to run he could see talk dark buildings on the side of him. He keeps on running and running until he stops he recognises that he has seen that building before he feels all frightened around he walks into a shop. The boy could see shadows he walked into the room and nobody was there. He ran back outside and saw something very horrible he saw dead bodies beneath him there was horror in his eyes he started running some more he tried not to look down he looked down he fell to the ground and started to cry “I want to go home” he said he heard a strange noise it sounded like a bell he looked up and he saw a very bright light he walked up and saw a little girl from the distance you could not see what she looked like but it was alright he walked up and went to go see what she looked like she had blue eyes and blonde hair she w
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