I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Ms. Komor.
Friday, 1 November 2013
Writing
The man stares into the pathway its narrow dark and filthy the, The man starts to run he keeps on running and running until he comes to a halt he looks around he could feel butterflies in his stomach he was scared and frightened he could hear voices saying go left go right he went left he saw a door he opened it and saw…. tunnels lots of tunnels he kept on running then he saw mirrors he stopped and looked at himself and saw brown hair brown eyes and tan skin he kept on running and running until he saw another he walked in and saw something very horrible he saw ghost beneath him he scared to death he kept on running and running he tried not to look down but he did he started he stopped and he fell and cried he felt miserable he stayed there for a little while he got back up and started to run again he was thinking while he was running in his mind he was thinking is this a dream or is this a trap he stop and sat down then suddenly the floor started to sink beneath him he was scared then suddenly he came to a portal he wondered what it was so he just walked into the Portal and came back when suddenly.
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