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Friday, 1 November 2013

Sumdog


This is a competition that is from sumdog the place that we are coming in is 7th so help us win os we can come first

Wednesday, 30 October 2013

Two Children


Franky and I was standing there watching people crawl across the road I turned around I saw kids getting taken away from their parents franky stood there and watched how  parents were bleeding and screaming on the road the rain began to turn red I was in horror I grabbed franky and started to hug her I told a story to hr it was about four kids who were brothers and sisters they were living in a cottage then a wizard came and then turned their dreams into wishes when the rain stopped soldier started running and finding little kids they were speaking in a language that I have never heard before I looked around curiously why are they taking away the children said franky I didn't know what to so back so  just covered her and I was scared to death i wondered will they take us to I peeked out the hole a soldier found us what will i do what will we do I was sitting there with no amount of time then I fought of a plan i told franky to close her eyes she did i picked her up and ran i ran like I was riding a horse cabin I found a hole i told franky to open her eyes and hide in there the place was big for both of us so franky jumped in first then I jumped in it was dark i told franky to keep it down i could hear soldier running past us as they were screaming like they were saying find them now franky and i slept there until the next day I was the first one to wake up I peeked my bog head out of the whole no soldier no nothing? while franky was sleeping I went hunting for food and water i went to the lake  

Today for writing I was writing a narrative about two kids that are running away from soldiers and trying to save themselves I have not finished my story yet but I hope you enjoy

CHARAECTERS: Me Franky
SETTING: CITY     

Friday, 25 October 2013

Man In The Mirror


This poem of the week is about war and peace between countrys.